Authors Note: This is a letter to Obi telling him what he did wrong in the story, Dead Man's Path.
Dear Obi,
You are a self-centered, mean person who only cares about yourself. You deserved to get fired because you had no right to close the pathway to the people. Your school would have never prospered because it takes a true leader that cares and listens to other people. You need to learn how to become a better listener and learn that what you do can affect other people. When you shut down the path, it made the people very angry and it was there before you. That’s what I don’t get. How did the headmaster before you handle it? He didn’t care that it went through the schools yard. He knew that it was important to the society and understood that it was wanted. When will you learn?
Sincerely,
Nick Roberts
I liked the use of the good amount of detail.
ReplyDeleteI think it could have been a little nicer.
I really overall liked the story.
I liked the point of view. It could've been a little more detail.I liked the overall story.
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